After the failed animation attempt, I wanted to try my hand at putting together a comic. I planned out a 25-30 page comic as an Independent Study class and worked to get 5 pages completed by the end of the term.
I broke down my writing into pages and then further down into sections. After that I worked on recreating the clones and removed more possibilities of differences by making them bald. I tried adding a character, a cyborg modeled after the clones that The Governance system would control.
The sketches below show this progress. I illustrated the same end scene as in the animation and really liked the results a lot more. I worked with changing up the composition and I felt that I was getting closer to where I wanted to be but I wasn’t quite there.
It was back to the drawing board.